Reviewer: DracoHerm17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/05 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

I agree. I was a good and intersting story. However, I can still see why you would make it a one shot. It might be hard to build a whole story on. Nevertheless, very well done. Bravo.

Reviewer: Shakespeare Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/05 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

i love this potion idea! this is definately one of my favorite stories, though, i do wish you could extend it. Build on it more! Or if you don't want to write more, use this potion idea in another story, a LONGER story. :)